Penggunaan CONTINUOUS, MOMENTS LATER dan LATER

Ada yg kata, cuba kurangkan penggunaan CONTINUOUS, MOMENTS LATER dan LATER ni jika tak pasti penggunaannye sbb dikhuatiri akan membuat reader keliru; and worst, ScriptWriter sendiri boleh terkeliru..

Penggunaan pada Heading / Slugline untuk menunjukkan kesinambungan antara dua scene yang tidak jauh lokasinya. 

Contoh dari skrip filem MILK 


INT. CITY HALL / SUPERVISOR'S OFFICES - MOMENTS LATER

Harvey leads Cleve down the hall of Supervisor's offices, passing Dianne Feinstein's open door.

HARVEY MILK
And street talk only around
Feinstein, shit, goddamn, fuck, all
that. It bugs the shit out of her.

They arrive at his Lead Aide's desk: it's Anne Kronenberg.

ANNE KRONENBERG
David Goodstein and Rick Stokes
called again. They want a lunch.

HARVEY MILK
Morning to you too Annie-pants,
Lets set Cleve up on mail. And what
about a return call from Briggs?

ANNE KRONENBERG
He's got no clue who you are.

HARVEY MILK
Doesn't he read the newspapers?

CLEVE JONES
We're not sure if he's literate.
He's from Fullerton.

A big grin from Harvey as he heads into his office.

INT. CITY HALL / HARVEY'S OFFICE - CONTINUOUS

Harvey walks in. Michael is already there proofing a Bill.

HARVEY MILK
That's our new Citywide Gay Right's
ordinance. What do you think?

MICHAEL WONG
How close are you?

HARVEY MILK
6 to 5 a week ago, but now it looks
like we'll get a unanimous vote. A
damn good warning shot for Briggs
against his prop 6 bull-shit.

MICHAEL WONG
Come on, Dan won't vote for this.

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